[例3] birth control is quite necessary in China. 低分 It is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted that birth control is quite necessary in China. 高分 技巧使用主语从句。Many people thinkIt is widely/commonly thought/believed/held/accepted.. [例4]More and more people agree/realize/are aware that women should enjoy full equality with men. 低分 There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that women should enjoy full equality with men. 高分 技巧使用存在句there be句型。More and more people agree/realize/are aware that...There is a growing agreement/realization/awareness that ... [例5]Many Chinese people have gone to the United states in the past 15 years. 低分 The past 15 years have brought many Chinese people to the United States. 高分 技巧用时间词作主语。效果非常好。如The last half of the 20th century has seen/witnessed many great breakthroughs in every aspect. 1. 英语中被动句的使用频率远远高于汉语。
[例1]They make a lot of innovations to make money for a few people. 低分 A lot of innovations are made to with the aim of making money for a few people. 高分 技巧宾语变主语。
[例2]We may think more of the elderly who live apart from their children. 低分 More thought may be given to the elderly who live apart from their children. 高分 技巧动词变名词。
2. 不要总是用“如果”、“因为”、“当”等口语意味较重的句子；
不要对动词过于依赖，要学会名词或介词结构来表达意思。
[例1]Even if you believe change is inevitable, this does not mean “change is always for the better”. 低分 However, reaching the conclusion that change is evitable is not the same as assuming that “change is always for the better”. 高分 技巧使用同位语从句。
[例1]If you compare bicycles with cars carefully, you will find bicycles are superior to cars. 低分 Careful comparison of bicycles with cars will show the superiority of the er over the latter. 高分 [例2]If we only apply book knowledge, we will not get good results.低分 The application of book knowledge alone won’t bring you good results. 高分 [例3]If we can better understand the greater pressure of the population growth, we will have a correct attitude towards family planning. 低分 A better understanding of the greater pressure of population growth is essential to a correct attitude towards family planning. 高分 [例4]If we are watching too much TV, our reading ability will be seriously affected. 低分 Heavy exposure to TV will rt a negative effect on our reading ability. 高分 [例5] When a woman sees that she is going to be laid off, she begins to worry all day and night. 低分 The mere prospect of lay-off would set a woman to worry all day and night. 高分 [例6]Because we can not apply book knowledge to practice, we can not handle real problems in society. 低分 The inability to apply book knowledge to practice prevented us from handling real problems in society. 高分 技巧把动词改成名词。
3. 不要总是用肯定句来表达，要学会用否定句来表达肯定的意思。
[例1]Every young boy and girl wants to earn a little money to help cover higher college cost. 低分 There is hardly a young boy and girl who does not want to earn a little money to help cover college cost. 高分 技巧everyhardlynot [例2]Food is the most basic issue to individual and national survival. 低分 No issue is as basic to individual and national survival as food. 高分 技巧最高级not as...as [例3]Whenever you pick up a newspaper, you will find advertisements. 低分 It is impossible to pick up a newspaper without finding advertisements. 高分 技巧wheneverimpossiblewithout 4. 恰当使用排比、平行句。
[例4]I am in favor of equal rights for women. I think women should especially have the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms. They should get the same pay as men for the same job. They should also have equal opportunities for promotion. 低分 I am in favor of equal rights for women, especially the right to compete with men for jobs on equal terms, the right to get the same pay as men for the same job, and the right to have equal opportunities for promotion. 高分 5. 使用同位语从句。
[例1]First, most people would agree that the Internet has improved the way we communicate. 低分 First of all, it is an indisputable fact that the Internet has revolutionized the way we communicate. 高分 6. 不要一个一个地罗列句子，要学会用分词和从句把它们连起来。
[例]Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, resort to smoking. Though they feel a little guilty sometimes. 低分 Pressured by school work and encouraged by their peers, teenagers often resort to smoking, though feeling a little guilty sometimes. 高分 2011年英语六级参考范文 Certificate Craze One of the latest crazes in Chinese colleges and universities is the drive to get multiple certificates in a variety of areas. Whether it’s a translation certificate, a driving certificate or a certificate or a certificate in math or science, many students hold the opinion that having extra certificates will help them find better jobs. The reasons why students prefer to acquire certificates are various. Some students are desperate for as many certificates as possible mainly because of the great pressure of finding a good job. CVs that do not have many highlights can hardly stand out. Owing to this, many students rt themselves to earn certificates so that they can beat their competitors in the job market. Besides, some hold that professional certificates are important supplement to their school work. Through successfully obtaining various certificates, students can prove their competence and gain self-confidence. As for me, though we can not deny the above benefits, we’d better not just join the parade and waste time on certificates that will never be helpful. Besides, it is the abilities that count in securing a job instead of a bunch of certificates. Moreover, we should also prepare for certificates in line with our interests, or rather, our career plan. 提升写作用词 描述问题 1. wise advisable, sensible, rational, reasonable 2. important decisive, crucial, primary, far-reaching, profound 3. good beneficial, enlightening, instructive, valuable, precious 4. famous distinguished, prestigious, renowned 5. clear specific, particular, definite, concrete 6. bad negative, adverse, disadvantageous, dreadful, unfavorable, ill 7. good positive, favorable, advantageous 8. useful helpful, beneficial, rewarding 9. bad serious, severe, grave 10. enough/plenty sufficient, adequate, abundant 11. have free time/have available 12. attractive enchanting, charming, appealing, alluring, fascinating 13. go out of date go out of fashion/style 14. very big/large tremendous, huge, giant, enormous 15. expensive precious, valuable, valued, cherished, treasured, costly, extravagant 16. strong keen, intense, fierce, violent 17. rich prosperous, flourishing, thriving, booming, wealthy, well-off 18. wonderful splendid, magnificent, superb, striking, marvelous 19. bad粗俗的，不雅的 unrefined, improper, crude, coarse, rough 20. dirty messy 21. great, surprising fantastic, incredible, unbelievable, extraordinary, marvelous, notable, amazing, astonishing 22. unusual exceptional, rare 23. difficult to understand complicated, complex, mysterious, incomprehensible, confusing, bewildering 24. only sole, single, unique 25. different kinds of a variety of, various, diverse, all sorts of, a wide range of 26. lower, worse低等的，次要的 inferior, junior, minor 27. higher, better superior, senior, major 28. waste time/money/space/energy浪费的time/money/space/energy-consuming 29. increase ascend, climb, rise, mount, roar, on the rise 30. fall descend, drop, decline 描述人物 1. hard-working conscientious, diligent 2. careful cautious 3. calm sober, sensible, rational 4. clever intelligent, brilliant, distinguished, remarkable 5. decided persistent, insistent, determined, resolute, resolved, firm 6. unfair biased, prejudiced, partial 7. not kind hostile, adverse, aggressive 8. worried anxious, uneasy, concerned 9. cold/not kind indifferent, unconcerned, uninterested, cold-hearted 10. tired exhausted, fatigued, run-down, worn-out, weary 11. frustrated discouraged, depressed, low-spirited 分析问题 1. desire ambition, thirst, aspiration 2. aim ambition, strategic goal, target 3. ability capability, competence, talent, faculty, capacity 4. good advantage, merit, benefit 5. bad side disadvantage, defect, flaw, drawback, deficiency 6. shortage insufficiency, inadequacy 7. fun entertainment, amusement 8. thing affair, business, matter 9. problem difficulty, crisis, disaster 10. friend acquaintance, intimate, associate, companion 11. people individuals, characters, folks 12. government authority 13 way/ approach, means, measure 采取措施 1. work play a role, per, function, serve, play a part, take effect 2. try to/work hard attempt to, make efforts to, endeavor to, manage to, try every means to 3. make full use of optimize, make best use of, make the most of 4. use employ, utilize, apply 5. teach tutor, coach, educate 6. cut reduce, decrease, lessen, diminish 7. makeshorter shorten, cut down, decrease 8. increase improve, enhance, raise, grow, mount, accelerate 9. give impart, donate, contribute 10. do practice, carry out, conduct, per 11. emphasize lay/place emphasis on, attach importance to, place weight on, highlight on 12. finish, realize achieve, accomplish, fulfill, complete 13. pay attention to专心于 set one’s mind on, concentrate on, be absorbed in, be engaged in, be occupied in, be attentive on, focuson 14. decide to do be determined to do, make up one’s mind to do, be resolved to do 15. experience undergo, endure, live with, go through 16. be used to be accustomed to, be adjusted to 17. love珍爱，珍惜，重视 cherish, treasure, value 18. understand digest, grasp, absorb 19. give up desert, abandon 20. get rid of remove, eliminate 21. prevent ban, prohibit, forbid 22. harm endanger, damage, threaten 23. stop/prevent hinder, curb, hamper, restrain, ward off 24. attract fascinate, tempt, appeal to 25. enlarge expand, broaden, widen, extend, spread 26. have occupy, hold, own, possess, contain 27. meet come across, meet with, encounter, be confronted with, be faced with 28. take part in participate in, engaged in, go in for 29. spend set aside, put aside, spare 30. surprise astonish, shock, startle 31. depend on rely on, lean on, be dependent on 32. getagain恢复 restore, recover, retain, resume 33. help make contribution to, do one’s bit to, assist 34. know be acquainted with, be familiar with 35. get to know be aware of, be conscious of 36. be careful about be cautious of, for fear of 37. don’t know be ignorant of 总结观点 1. think/consider argue, maintain, hold, harbor the idea that, take the attitude that, hold the view that, it is widely shared that, it is universally acknowledged that, takeinto consideration/account 2. judge come to the conclusion, draw the conclusion, conclude, decide 3. prove testify, confirm, verify, turn out, acquire, attain, obtain, reap 4. get earn, gain, procure 5. support in favor of, agree with, approve of, consent to, advocate, recommend 6. like be fond of 7. be against/disagree with be opposed to, object to, disapprove of, reject, frown on 8. show demonstrate, reflect, manifest, indicate, reveal 9. It is decided that be doomed to, be destined to 10. explain account for, illustrate, clarify 11. predict anticipate, foretell, foresee 12. say convey, express, deliver 13. tell depict, describe, display, picture, reveal, demonstrate 14. makebelieve convince, assure, confirm 15. cause give rise to, lead to, result in, trigger 16. indicate/suggest be indicative of, be suggestive of, be fearful 17. remember bear/keep in mind that 程度副词 1. very exceedingly, extremely, intensely 2. very much to a great extent, to a large degree 3. gradually step by step, little by little, bit by bit, be degrees 4. forever permanently, constantly 5. suddenly abruptly, unexpectedly 6. certainly unquestionably, unsurprisingly, undoubtedly, definitely, It is no wonder that 7. more and more increasingly 8. almost practically, approximately 9. often more often than not 短语 1. for example/instance as an example, to name only a few 2. much/a lot of a great deal of, a great amount of 3. many, a lot of, many kinds of a great many of, many a, a great variety of, a multitude of, a host of, a majority of, a list of, a series of 4. some a slice of, quite a few, several, a couple of 5. a little somewhat, to a degree 6. before ahead of time/schedule, in advance, beforehand, prior to 7. in my opinion for my part, from my own perspective 8. and as well as 9. think/talk/see/hear at the idea of, at the mention of, at the sight of, at the sound of 10. have to do/must do be/feel obliged to do sth. 11. seeas regard as, consider as, look on as, treat as, perceiveas, refer toas, viewas 12. it possible to Be likely to do, it is likely to 13. be made up of, consist of, be composed of 14. besides apart from, in addition to, along with 15. lie be located, be situated, stand, sit 16. for/ to for the sake of, in order to, so as to 17. because of as a result of, on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to 18. because seeing that, in that, now that, for the reason that, on the grounds that, not thatbut that 19. according to in the light of, in terms of 20. in fact in effect, in reality, as matter of fact, actually 21. now/nowadays at present, at the moment, currently 22. then afterwards, later on, later, after all 23. finally at length, ultimately, eventually 24. by by means of 25. by the way incidentally 26. get derivefrom, originatefrom 27. be different from distinguish from 28. if provided that, as long as, in case, in the event that, assuming that, suppose/supposing , on condition that 29. sometimes from time to time, once in a while, now and then 30. never at no time, by no means, under no circumstances, on no account/consideration 31. It is obvious that/obviously it goes without saying that, it is self-evident that 32. have a chance to/of stand a chance of, have an opportunity to 33. I am sorry to say that It is a pity/regret that 提升写作短语 1. be prone to 易于，有的倾向，很容易 Weak people are prone to such minor diseases as colds and stomachaches. 2. be proficient in at 精通于 In finding a better job, those who are proficient in two or more foreign languages usually have priority over those who speak only one foreign language. 3. give sb. insights into使了解 I hope that our talk has given you some insights into the kind of work that we’ve been doing. 4. run counter to与相抵触，与背道而驰 The feelings of the common folks are to the point of running counter to the wishes of the government. 5. make an attempt at 企图，试图，打算 It was obvious that he was making an attempt at mending fences with the boss. 很显然，他正在试图改善与老板的关系。
6. develop a passion for 对产生激情，开始爱好 You’ll certainly develop a deep passion for the subject if you dig into it. 7. be aimed at旨在；
目的在于 The new rule is aimed at promoting the students to be more spontaneous in studies. 8. have a far-reaching/profound effect on.对有深远的影响 The English teacher had a profound effect on her further study. 9. be consistent with 与一致，与相符 This policy is consistent with the common good of the people公众的利益. 10. go any length to do 不遗余力做 You bet we’ll go any length to assist in the project, rain or shine. 11. stand a good chance of很有的希望 There are always people who stand no chance of making bundles 赚大钱, no matter how hard they work. 12. draw/come to/arrive at/ reach a conclusion 得出结论 From the above-mentioned key points, we can safely draw the conclusion that 13. take advantage of利用 You take full advantage of this opportunity of studying abroad. 14. lay a solid foundation for为打下坚实基础 The knowledge and skills you have obtained will lay a solid foundation for your future career. 16. account for说明，解释 A number of factors account for the differences between the two scores. 17. supplement to sth.的补充，的增补 Some hold that professional certificates are important supplement to their school work. 18. be closed related to与密切相关 19. make the best/most of 充分利用 20. put forward 提出 21. remind sb. of sth.提醒某人某事 22. specialize in专攻 23. takefor granted认为理所当然 24. takeinto account考虑 25. range fromto 在和之间变化 26. yield to屈从 27. come up with想出（主意），提出（办法） 28. do away with废除 28. look forward to盼望 29. stand up for支持，拥护 30.stand up to勇敢地面对 31. lose one’s temper发脾气 32. make a difference有关系，有影响，起（重要）作用 33. make full preparation for为做充分准备 34. cast/shed/throw light on阐明某事，使某事显得非常清楚 35. do damage to破坏 36. do research on对进行研究 37. rt pressure on对施加影响 38. give rise to使发生，引起 39. have an effect/impact/influence on对有影响/作用 40. justify oneself for为辩护 41. make a mess of把弄得乱七八糟 42. make reference to 43. put an end to结束，停止 44. at length最终，终于 45. at sb’s disposal任处理 46. at random任意地 47. for the sake of为了，为了的利益，出于的原因 47. in line with与一致 48. in pursuit of追求，为达到目的 49. in the course of在期间、过程中 50. in the long run从长远来看 51. in terms of就来说，以的观点 52. in vain徒劳，白费力 53. in view of鉴于，考虑到；
由于 54. of one’s own view自愿地 55. on the ground of因为 56. to a great extent在很大程度上 57. with a view to以为目的，为了 58. with respect to关于，至于 59. be abundant in富于 60. be aware of意识到 61. be bound to do sth.一定会 62. be capable of有能力做 63. be committed to doing sth.承诺做某事 64. be confronted/faced with面临，面对 65. be consistent with与一致 66. be engaged in从事于 67. be enthusiastic about热心于 68. be familiar with a subject熟悉 69. be equivalent to等于，相当于 70. be ignorant of对无知（不了解） 71. be inferior to低于，不如 72. be justified in doing sth. 有做某事的正当理由 73. be keen on爱好，喜爱 74. be particular about挑剔，讲究 75. be popular with受的欢迎 76. be prior to对负责 77. be related/relevant to与相关 78. be responsible for对负责 79. be similar to类似于 80. be tired ofbe fed up with因而厌倦 81. solution to 的解决办法 There are no simple solutions to unemployment problems. 82. restraint on限制，约束 We need to rcise restraint on spending. 83. response to对的回答，反应 There has been a generous response to the appeal on behalf of the earthquake victims. 84. access to 的入口，通路 Many people like to live in big cities where they can have access to some modern facilities. 85. awareness of 意识 Increased environmental awareness has led to a greater demand for recycled paper. 86. barrier to的障碍 Lack of confidence is the biggest barrier to investment in the region. 87. comment on评论 At the press conference, the reporter refused to make any comment on the issue. 88. confidence in对的信心 We need a chairman in whom every one has confidence. 89. congratulations on祝贺 Please pass on my congratulations on her winning the race when you see her. 90. consent to同意 Both the husband’s and wife’s consent to the sale is required. 91. contribution to 对的贡献，捐献，促成 Community police have made a very positive contribution to crime prevention. 92. delight in对的喜欢 She takes delight in teasing her sister. 93. exposure to sth. 暴露于；
接触 Long exposure to sunlight will do harm to one’s skin. 94. improvement on方面的改进 The service is definitely an improvement on what we had last time. 95. inquiry into 对的调查 96. investment in投资于 97. loyalty to 对的忠诚 98. passion for对的强烈