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White-hot Training in the Society 1. 目前社会上的各种培训趋于白热化 2. 阐明这种现象产生的原因 3. 说明这种现象带来的影响 White-hot Training in the Society A recent survey indicates that an increasingly large number of people attend various training enthusiastically. And there has been a heated argument about whether people should attend it. Different people hold different views due to their financial conditions and personal inclinations. Many people attended various training willingly for the sake of a high mark on the academic records or getting different certificates. As for me, I am in favor of going against training. For one thing, the aim of training is to help people pass all kinds of examinations and it mainly focuses on the teaching of examination skills, and it never trains people to think creatively and even restricts their efforts in getting command of the knowledge. For another, people spend so much time participating various training that they cannot find enough time for new or creative work. Moreover, the tuition fees of the training are usually high, thus laying great financial burden on people. From the above analysis, attending training will do people no good, and it is time-consuming as well as costly. Therefore, more and more people should be aware of the disadvantages of various training. 1.有的大学生认为大学生活是丰富多彩、充实的 2.有的大学生对校园生活不满意 3.你理想中的大学生活是什么样的谈谈你的感受 Campus Life Early in senior high school, we longed to be enrolled in a university. Now the dream has come true. But how do we college students like our campus life Certainly, some relish it, finding it colorful and rewarding. Besides study, they spend considerable amount of time improving themselves in various aspects. Yet others do not think much of their college life, thus do not benefit as much. In their eyes, the university is just a bigger high school. The only difference is that they have more time at their disposal without parents looking over their shoulder. As to me, college life is ideal if only I have abundant books to read, some bosom friends to keep me company, a couple of conscientious professors to instruct me, and an easy access to the Internet. How to Keep Psychologically Healthy Outline 1. 心理健康问题往往是导致疾病的原因 2. 分析人们产生心理健康问题的原因 3. 你认为人们该如何保持心理健康 One in four people will experience some kind of mental health problem in the course of a year. When you fail to control these problems, they are likely to cause various mental illnesses and, as a result of physiological imbalance, physical illnesses. You may not be able to live a normal life, let alone a fulfilling one. The causes of mental health problems often vary a lot from one case to another. In today’s society, a good number of people are suffering from heavy pressure. Others are lacking in communication skills and feel they are living in an isolated world. In addition, a lot of people are ignorant of psychological knowledge about how to keep mentally fit. There are a lot of ways to curb mental health problems and keep psychologically healthy. Firstly, find the real cause of your mental health problem and see whether you can do something to make a change. Secondly, learn to relax yourself and take rcise to release the pressure. After all, your health is what counts most. Lastly, you may find it helpful to talk to your partner, a relative or a friend about your problems, or seek support and advice from a psychological consultant. 1. 时下电视选秀节目非常流行 2. 有人认为选秀很好,能给普通人展示自己的机会 3. 我的观点 On TV Show TV has been one medium of communication that has connected millions. And it is this link that makes talent hunt shows on the tube amazingly influential. Young faces conveying disappointment or even overwhelming joy have become a common sight on as many channels as your remote allows you to surf. Some people have their opinions on the TV shows. The advantages of the shows are clear to some people. For one thing, in terms of business, the increasing popularity of talent shows has helped the channels in generating huge income by way of advertising and promotions. For another thing, the TV shows can make the common people have opportunity to show themselves. Personally, I side with the above opinion. It is a wonderful feeling and a great way to relax for me to watch talent shows and see ordinary people like myself become famous and win cash prizes. As long as talent shows are entertaining and inspiring us, there is great sense in keeping and encouraging them. 1. 什么是课桌文化 2. 为什么会出现课桌文化 3. 我们应该如何对待这一现象 Desk Culture Sitting in a classroom at college, you occasionally catch sight of something written on the desk, which is a reflection of some college students’ psychology and becomes part of the campus culture. This is why it is called “desk culture”. Desk culture has its substantial content. On most occasions they are definitions, ulas, or English expressions kept either for memory, for convenience because students have no paper at hand, or because they have them for special “service”to provide ination for cheating in exams. Sometimes there are also some ragged verses, drawings or even dirty words created by some naughty or sentimental ones, made for joking or expressing their own feelings. Occasionally there are some mottos for encouragement, or some senseless marks habitually made to kill time when they are bored or absent-minded in class. In a word, all these contribute to the flourishing desk culture. As far as I am concerned, desk culture indirectly indicates college students’ mental attitudes. It is, for whatever reasons, at least a destruction of the perfection of the desks. So colleges concerned should take effective measures against it and put more emphasis on quality education and spiritual civilization. 1. 社团活动成为大学生活中不可缺少的一部分 2. 学生为什么热衷参加社团 3. 我的看法 Associations on Campus Nowadays, there are various associations on campus, with association activities being an indispensable part of college students’ life. Associations do have many advantages which hold appeal for college students. Firstly, association activities can enrich college students’ life. Whatever they are interested in, they can find relevant associations such as calligraphy association or painting association to take part in. Secondly, they can get acquainted with many friends with similar interests in associations. Just as the saying goes Birds of a feather flock together. They may become good friends. Thirdly, the experience gained in associations may pave the way for their upcoming career development. Take a friend of mine as an example,since she was a pupil, she has set her mind to be a journalist. She joined the photography association of the university and the skills as well as experience she gained there are of great help for her job-hunting. Finally, her dream came true. In my opinion, association is to college students what salt is to food. They can not only add flavor to our college life, but may also provide us with a passport to a bright future. Should Olympic Athletes Get High Salaries 1 雅典奥运会后,关于获奖运动员高薪的问题引起了社会的广泛关注。

2有些人支持这种做法,认为运动员们付出了很多,赢得回报;
有些人则持反对意见。

3我的观点 After the Olympic Games in Athens, Greece, the topic of whether it is fair for athletes to pocket large sums of money from their Olympic participation is arousing more and more interest from the public. Those who support high salaries for these athletes may offer some of the following reasons. Firstly, the athletes in the Olympic Games must have undergone painstaking physical and psychological training. It naturally follows that they deserve monetary compensation for these sacrifices. What’s more, they make significant contributions to a positive international reputation for their home countries. Some others, on the contrary, say that the athletes do little to boost the national economy directly, and thus should not receive compensation of the monetary kind. As for me, I side with the supporters of greater compensation for Olympic athletes. The more we give, the more we deserve to have. On account of all the time and energy they spend in rigorous training, I firmly believe that they should get high salaries. Should we Be the Close Followers of the New Conceptions 1. 每当社会上出现一种新的理念new conceptions时,人们对此的反映是不同的 2. 为什么会出现这样的现象 3. 我们应该采取的态度 Whenever a new conception appears in the society, people adopt different attitudes towards it. Some people follow it closely; some recognize its importance but disagree on many minor aspects; some others just reject it entirely. A new conception is, on most of the occasions, a revolution or defiance against the old concepts. Therefore, it is controversial. On one hand, followers of the traditional ideas may refute it flatly; on the other hand, those people who have suffered from the traditions would welcome the revolution heartily. Among all the social groups, the young people are the most easily influenced by novel things. Therefore, we should adopt a cautious attitude towards new conceptions. We should keep in mind that some new conceptions that sound reasonable and reative may in fact be misleading and even endangering the right current of social development. Instead of blindly following them, we should observe them carefully and analyze them critically. Through the observation and analysis, we may identify the conceptions that will actually contribute to the social development. It is only those contributive conceptions that we shall follow. What Causes a Boom in Celebrating Foreign Festivals Believe it or not, these years have witnessed a boom in celebrating foreign festivals on the Chinese campus. According to an official report/survey, young people, especially college students, are showing more and more interest in such festivals as Valentine’s Day, April Fools’ Day, Thanksgiving Day and Christmas Day. To get a better sense of the boom, it is necessary for us to find out its causes. A closer analysis of the phenomenon can find that three main factors are well worth our concern. In the first place, it is the product of students’ seeking after individuality and novelty, for which the college campus offers an ideal climate. In the second, it is seen, among the students, as an ideal way of freeing themselves from stress for the time being, since most college students, single child of each family, are subjected to the unprecedented pressures from all sides although they enjoy the abundance of material wealth. And above all, it is an inevitable result of more and more exchanges between Western and Eastern cultures. While the Chinese watch their children thirst for the joy derived from foreign festivals, in fact, the Americans are discussing whether or not to list the Chinese Spring Festival among their official holidays. The effects of this change on our college life are positive. On the one hand, it has created more chances for students to gain a better insight into other cultures. On the other, it has enriched the college life, thus making the campus a more pleasant place to live on. With more and more health and color added to the trend, I firmly believe, it will certainly bring more benefits to our campus life in the time to come. What Enlightenment Can Be Gained from the World’s Mysteries While we watch man’s ability to tame the nature increase with each passing day, the human world is often at a loss what to do in the face of such challenges as the world’s mysteries. The mystery of black holes, for example, has cast much doubt on what we have long been proud of or firmly convinced of. With a constant emergence of the unknown in the future, in fact, man will have to be faced with more and more of such challenges. If taken seriously, however, these challenges can shed new light on our ways of seeing and changing the world. For one thing, they can help build up man’s curiosity for the world around him, as it is the nature of man to seek for the better explanation of something foreign to him. For another, they can remind man of his ignorance about the objective world, thus making him aware of the fact that man is still far from perfect in knowledge acquisition. And best of all, they can prove man to be a part of the nature rather than the master of the nature. In this light, man has every reason to take account of all the important factors concerning the nature in the course of his struggle for a better survival and attach to each its due weight. So most important for us now is how to respond to the challenges with positive action. On the one hand, in my opinion, we must give full play to their strong incentive for our further exploration of the unknown world. But on the other, we must prevent them from becoming the breeding ground for pseudo-science or superstition. As long as we see them in perspective, therefore, they will serve as an ever-increasing force behind the human progress. Work in Countryside 1. 有的大学毕业生自愿到农村去工作 2. 为什么会出现这种现象 3 我的看法 Work in Countryside To work in countryside used to be the impossible choice for college graduates. However, things hanged in recent years. Many, even a large number, have chosen to work in countryside after accomplishing their higher education. For example, there will be 2000 college graduates heading for the countryside in the summer of 2006 in Beijing. Why do the once so-called “god-favored ones” make such choice There are many reasons. The first reason lies in the tight job market in the big cities. It is no more easy to find a job that can provide them sufficient space for self-development. The second reason is the attractive conditions offered by the government, such as a handsome salary, a guarantee of citizenship in the city, favourable terms for post-graduate exams, etc. The third reason belongs to the wish of realizing values of life. Many of them have set up magnificent goals for themselves. In my regard, I whole-heartedly approve of the move. The countryside obtains the high-level talents for its development, and at the same time, the graduates find a place to rcise their expertise and passion. It is both beneficiary to the individuals and the country as whole.