王军考研英语写作补充材料x

北京大学在职研究生http//www.edubnu.com 王军老师8月2号考研英语写作补充材料 西安人信学校 王军 编辑 亲爱的同学们 为了帮助你们更好的复习备考,我把今天讲课的教案整理后发给你们,希望你们能认真研读这些资料,从而真正把知识转化为实际的写作能力。如果我的课程能够给你们带来启迪和帮助的话,那是我最快乐的事情。

(1)2008年真题解析和操作方法演示 Part A 51. Directions You have just come back from Canada and found a music CD in your luggage that you forgot to return to Bob, your landlord there. Write him a letter to 1 make an apology, and 2 suggest a solution. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead. Do not write the address. 10 points Dear Bob, (1)I am Li Ming, the student from China who had been living in your home for the past two weeks. (2)Now, I am writing this letter to make an apology to you for my carelessness. (3)During my stay in Canada, I borrowed a music CD from you since I intended to learn some English songs. (4)But when I unpacked my luggage last night, I found that I had forgotten to return the CD to you. (5)I feel quite sorry for this. (6)In order to make up for the mistake I made, I will ask Tom, one of my best friends in Canada, to buy a new one for you. (7)If you don’t like the new one, I would try to send it back to you as soon as possible by UPS. (8)At last, please forgive me for the inconvenience caused again. Part B 52. Directions Write an essay of 160–200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1 describe the drawing briefly, 2 explain its intended meaning, and then 3 give your comments. You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. 20 points 你一条腿,我一条腿;
你我一起,走南闯北。

第一段操作方法 (1)The picture above gives us a vivid description of two disabled people. (2)In this picture, the two handicapped men are supporting each other and heading towards their destination with strides, leaving their walking sticks far behind. (3)Just as the caption below goes, “Cooperation enables us to go wherever we want.” (4)Undoubtedly, the cartoonist aims at reminding us of the importance of cooperation and mutual help in the modern society. 第二段操作一 (1)The implied meaning of the drawing can be interpreted in terms of mutual help and cooperation. (2)To begin with, mutual help is badly needed in our social life. As social beings, people depend on each other in our life, work and study. (3)Only by way of mutual assistance can we overcome our shortcomings and realize our self-value and dream. (4)What’s more, cooperation is essential to our social work and the building of the harmonious society. (5)With the rapid development of science and economy, people are increasingly feeling the power of mutual help and cooperation. (6)For instance, many great achievements in the history of human civilization can not be achieved without the joint efforts of people. (7)In short, we need to realize that neither our society nor our personal life can be separated from cooperation. 第二段操作二 →(1)In the real life, there is no one who can achieve the remarkable success in whatever he does without the support rendered by his colleagues and partners. →(2)let us Take the super basketball star Yao Ming as an example, he often says like this before media, “The cooperation and support of my teammates is indispensable to my success. (3)Without their unselfish help, I will not be so fortunate to have such a successful perance.” →(4)Apart from the example of Yao, many other great figures in the history also attributed their success to the cooperation and mutual help. →(5)Likewise, the successful launching of Chinas first lunar probe, Change-1, also resulted from the joint efforts of Chinese scientists instead of the individual accomplishment. (6)As a result, cooperation is essential to both social development and our individual growth. 第三段操作一 →(1)In my view, some necessary measures must be taken to make people realize “United, we stand, divided, we fall.” (2)First of all, an education campaign should be launched to educate people on the importance of mutual help and cooperation. (3)In addition, more relevant activities should be created for young people to cultivate the sense of mutual help and cooperation. (4)Only in these ways can we build up a society full of harmony. 第三段操作二 → (13)From all mentioned above, therefore, we can come to a conclusion that we should put great emphasis on the cooperation and mutual help in the competitive world. →(14)For one thing, we should try to cultivate our sense of cooperation and mutual help through participating in the relevant activities. (15)For another, we should be fully aware of the value of cooperation to our growth in the future. (16)Only in this way can we benefit more from our mutual help and cooperation. (2)阅读中尝试模仿写作 以考研真题中的英语知识综合运用为例说明阅读和写作的关系,并强调模仿在写作中的重要性。

1 Teachers need to be aware of the emotional, intellectual, and physical changes that young adults experience. And they also need to give serious 1 thought to how they can best 2 accommodate such changes. 派生句 Recently, the increasing emphasis has been put on the growth of teenagers. In order to ensure their healthy growth, on the one hand, both teachers and parents try to be aware of children’s emotional, intellectual and physical changes that they experience in the different periods of time, which makes it possible for the adults to give the correct guidance in a variety of aspects. On the other hand, being teachers and parents, we also need to give a serious thought to how we can help them best accommodate so many drastic changes. All in all, the guidance from teachers and parents will, in a sense, determine whether our children will grow in a positive way or not. 2 Growing bodies need movement and 3 rcises , but not just in ways that emphasize competition 4 because they are adjusting to their new bodies and a whole host of new intellectual and emotional challenges, teenagers are especially self-conscious and need the 5 confidence that comes from achieving success and knowing that their accomplishments are 6 admired by others. 派生句 We should encourage our children to participate in the social activities which are beneficial to their growing bodies. But these activities should not be limited to the ways that emphasize competition because they need to know more about the real world through some practical work so as to adjust themselves to a host of new challenges. Besides, the teenagers are especially self-conscious and need the confidence that comes from achieving success and knowing that their accomplishments are admired by others, which is critical to their individual success in the future. 3 However, the typical teenage lifestyle is already filled with so much competition that it would be 7 wise to plan activities in which there are more winners than losers, 8 for example, publishing newsletters with many student-written book reviews, 9 displaying student artwork, and sponsoring book discussion clubs. A variety of small clubs can provide 10 multiple opportunities for leadership, as well as for practice in successful 11 group dynamics. 派生句 The children’s academic burden should be moderately reduced. Now, their typical lifestyle is already filled with so much competition that it would be wise to plan activities in which they can have a good relaxation, for example, going camping, taking part in the physical rcise or sponsoring various book clubs. All these activities will provide them with multiple opportunities for fostering their independence, adaptability and self-confidence. 4 Making friends is extremely important to teenagers, and many shy students need the 12 security of some kind of organization with a supportive adult 13 barely visible in the background. 派生句 Making friends is extremely important to us, especially to the young people. As is known to us all, a person cannot do without friends in the modern society because there are so many different kinds of tasks that require mutual cooperation and help. Besides, you will find that friends can not only give us good suggestions but also make you feel the pleasure of the life. Most importantly, with friends, you will find life rewarding and worthwhile. (3)考研英语写作表达集萃 给考生的忠告养成良好的语言表达习惯是提高写作的前提 第一部分语言表达和句型拓展 1. The photos vividly depict some young people who like to follow the fashion. As we can see from the picture, the guy on the left puts Beckham’s name on his left face, while the guy on the right asks the hairdresser to copy the hair-style of Beckham at the cost of 300 yuan. Obviously they both are crazy fans of Beckham, a well-known British football player. The picture above gives us a vivid description of an interesting football game between two players. The door keeper on the left considers him as a person weak in strength while the player on the right looks on him as . Obviously, the picture aims at revealing a fact that many young people are lack of confidence in both and. As is vividly depicted in the picture above, .. What an impressive picture Just as we can see. 2. Nowadays, “national culture or international culture” has become a matter of great concern for the general public in our society. Now, let’s take a look at the American girl in traditional Chinese costume. She looks very beautiful, with a nice smile on her face. It seems that the girl is very fond of Chinese costume. 3. As is shown in this picture, we can see clearly that a charming American girl who is wearing the traditional Chinese costume is smiling to us. The purpose of this picture is that with the development of globalization, great changes have taken place in the world, and one’s nation culture has been accepted by the people from another culture. Undoubtedly, the picture aims at revealing a fact that our traditional culture has been accepted by most of the westerners along with the rapid development of the globalization. 4. What a thought-provoking cartoon As is vividly revealed in the drawing, four grown-ups are playing a special “football match”. The eldest son is kicking away the old father like a football, while his two brothers and the youngest sister are guarding their goals so as to prevent the poor old man from dropping into their own nets. Obviously, the picture aims at revealing a social P. Who should be responsible for .” 5. As is vividly depicted in the drawing above, a student is asking a fortune-teller to predict his future. What is conveyed in the drawing is a common social phenomenon among young people. 6. This kind of social phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence. There are some reasons accounting for this. 7. The implied meaning of the drawing is obvious the old parents are not properly treated in some families and the old generation has become a burden to their children. This drawing reflects a moral question who are supposed to take the responsibility of attending to the aged parents 8. A plays an increasingly important role in The cultural exchange is playing an increasingly important part/ role in the social progress along with the rapid development of globalization. To find a decent job with handsome salary is becoming increasingly difficult for college students nowadays. Cooperation plays a vital role in our individual success in the modern society. 9. Nowadays, the problem ofis becoming more and more serious than before, especially in Air pollution is one of the biggest problems that we are facing today, especially in. The picture above gives us a vivid description of two disable people. Just as we can see from the picture, the two disabled people are supporting each other to head toward..Obviously, What . 10. There is a general debate on whether we shouldnowadays. There is a general debate on the SP reflected in the picture given above. 11. Easing students’ study burden is beneficial to students both physically and mentally. Such practice is, in the long run, beneficial to the growth of young people. Fostering our confidence is, ., .. In my opinion, enhancing the cultural exchange is beneficial to both and . In my view, cultivating the sense of responsibility is beneficial to our growth in many aspects. 12. To cooperate with others well, one should be tolerant, considerate. In order to turn our dreams into reality, we must learn how to cooperate with others well. Only in this way can we win more support from others. 13. As can be seen from the table, we can clearly see that sports activities occupies most of their spare time. 14. I like to watch TV because it is inative, educational and entertaining. Self-confidence is very important because it enables us to overcome whatever difficulties that we come across in the real life. Good health is very important because it enables us to have successful career. 15. We consider it necessary to develop good study habits. Consideras We consider it badly necessary to reach out our helping hands to those who are in the quake-hit areas. Honesty is considered to be the best policy of a person. The mutual help is badly needed in. Some measures must be taken . 16. As far as college students are concerned, we should concentrate on study. 17. Only in this way can we adapt ourselves to the social development. 18. The opening policy will undoubtedly result in a positive effect on the economic development. Some parents hold that the blind idol worship will possibly result in a negative effect on the growth of. 19. The wildlife cannot remain alive in the atmosphere which has been polluted. ..will cease to exist in 20. The pirated products can be found everywhere, which has resulted in a great economic loss. We should ., which is essential to our final success. The internet has been, which makes it possible for us to greatly improve . This .person who is.. We should put great emphasis on.., which is beneficial to. 21. What’s important is to apply what we have learned from both books to the practice. The college students should be encouraged to participate in .because it will offer them more opportunities to apply bk to the social . 22. We should arouse people’s awareness of fighting against drugs. 23. The theory is closely associated with practice. 24. We should attach great importance to education. 25. We should take a . attitude towards failure. Some people take a hostile attitude towards daydreaming. 26. Some people attribute their success to the hard work. 27. We should be aware of the importance of courage. 28. We are badly in need of the help in such a case. 29. We are convinced that our society will be full of love and harmony. We are convinced that a society full of.will be created through our joint efforts. 30. No doubt, Internet can benefit us in a variety of aspects. Cooperation can benefit us in many aspects. On the one hand, .on the other hand, .. As a result, .is indispensable to our . 31. It is true that on-line education has brought us a lot of benefits. Cooperation will bring us courage and confidence to overcome whatever .that we come across in 32. People hold different opinions about A. Some argue that.while others maintain that 33. Language learning offers us a chance to know more about the western countries. The social practice offers us a good chance to know more about the real world. 34. Compared with tradition teaching, creative teaching has many unique advantages. 35. We can come to the conclusion that 36. A will greatly contribute to B. 37. There are many factors leading to the rise in the number of people who.. There are many factors leading to the rise in juvenile delinquency. 38. Some effective measures must be taken to In my view, some effective measures must be taken to cope with this complicated problem. On the one hand, G On the other hand, aware Only in this way can we handle the problem properly. 39. The family atmosphere will have a profound influence on the growth of 40. Courage will determine whether we can overcome the difficulties or not. 41. The social practice enables us to have a better understanding of the real world. Encouraged Hand, vision Hand, better Badly necessary 42. Taking up part-time job will greatly enrich our campus life. 43. It is estimated that the time spent on sports amounts to 10 hours a week. 44. We are faced with a serious problem. 45. How to handle this problem Several factors, I think, must be taken into consideration. Solve cope with, handle, 46. Were it left to me to make a choice between the two points, I would not hesitate for a moment to prefer the er. 47. It is hard to imagine what our life would be like without energy. 48. We should launch a worldwide campaign to bring under control. For one thing, a nationwide campaign should be launched so as to help those people in the quake-hit areas get out of difficulty. For another, . Only in this way. 49. It can be predicted that the global temperature will continue to rise due to the green house effect. 50. More and more people come to realize that honesty is more important in the market economy. Fortunately, a growing number of people come to realize that cooperation is essential to their success. 51. It is important to translate the book knowledge into ability. 52. The people’s opinions aboutvary from person to person. 53. Great changes have taken place in our life. 54. The shortage of resources is an inevitable result of overpopulation. Evidently, the global food shortage is considered to be an inevitable result of overpopulation. 55. Recently, this phenomenon has aroused wide concern. The s f reflected in the picture above has aroused wide concern. The problem of j d reflected in the picture has . 56. It is advisable to attach great importance to language study. We consider it advisable for us to do sth. Some parents consider it advisable to attach great importance to the cultivation of children’s ability to live independently. That is why . 57. The private cars make our life more comfortable and convenient than before. 58. As is shown in this chart, there is a dramatic change in the number of people who use computer. 59. Smoking will do great harm to people’s health. 60. Computers, to some extent, are indispensable to our life. 61. The children should not be deprived of the rights to receive good education. Dear sir, I am.and I intend to..because I learned from the newspaper that the children have been deprived of the rights to .. You need to take two factors into consideration when you are looking for such a candidate. On the one hand, //////on the other hand, the girl student with outstanding academic achievements will be preferred. I intend to carry out my plan as follows for one thing, for another, . I am looking forward to..Thank you in advance. 62. The numerous examples have proved that 63. It is urgent for us to take steps to control the pollution of water. 64. In the past few years, there has been a sharp decline in the number of people who go to the cinema. The number of the people doing sth declined sharply this month. 65. Personally, I am in favor of this opinion. 66. It is high time that we took measures to tackle this problem. 67. A number of factors could account for these changes. Several factors can be used to account for the great achievements that the Chinese people have made in the field of sports during the past two decades. 68. In my view, such phenomenon as abusing the old father must be condemned by everyone of conscience. 69. In order to curb this amoral trend, relevant laws and regulations must be established to ensure the welfare of the aged. 70. Those who shun the responsibilities of taking care of their old parents should be punished. Only in this way can we create a moral and harmonious society. Those who cheat on tests